RPG-Maker Quartier

Ich habe einen Song für einen Freund von mir geschrieben, der derzeit in einer Lebenskrise steckt. Feedback ist erwünscht:

A real story

I want to tell you a story; it’s about a man,
Who had no easy life, it’s determined of pain
But he was a fighter and was no slave of his fate
And someday he will find the right gate

His father was a man of brutality
How could be the son so differently?
Should he end in criminality?
Prison, isn’t the right penalty

Everybody should get a second chance
Should he end, begging your ten cents?
We can’t allow that you throw your life away
I promise you’ll find your right way

You can’t think with alcohol in your blood
And so you gave some guys an uppercut
But you just did it to protect your friends
Nobody can destroy our bond, it never ends

Refrain:

We'll fight till the end
Till blood is in our bodies
Till air is in our lungs
Till our ashes is spread over the ocean

You will rise like the phoenix from ashes
Shining like a star
Believe in you, we are one
Believe in you, we are one



We will bandage you if you are hurt
We will be there for you if you are sad
We will celebrate with you if you are happy
And we will fight for you if it’s necessary

But let never be controlled by hatred
It’s burning in your heart like acid
Time be heroic, we feel no fear
I’m sure that your despair will disappear

You can make me laugh with one sentence
Being a friend is your essence
Nobody can judge beside god
And his judgement is hopefully good

Believe in you and your skills
You are more worth than a few bills
I know you made some bad experience
But we are different, our bond, it never ends

Refrain:

We'll fight till the end
Till blood is in our bodies
Till air is in our lungs
Till our ashes is spread over the ocean

You will rise like the phoenix from ashes
Shining like a star
Believe in you, we are one
Believe in you, we are one

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